Pine Retaining Wall Would This Make A Good Song Based On The Lyrics?

Would this make a good song based on the lyrics? - pine retaining wall

It is a pop-rock song

Keep these:

I look in the mirror
Red Eye at the beginning of an avalanche
I look in the mirror
I ask these questions

Was it worth all
Was it worth my pride
If the collapse and fall
Had a call to 911

And now I know
Why live and learn
Everyone who has betrayed us
Keep this
Keep the hatred I feel for you
Everyone who has betrayed us

Lately, my eyes fixed on a wall
Crack even three hours at a stretch
And lately I feel for some
I can not ask these questions

Was this only once
Did you know that it
When I showed a picture
Can you understand

And now I know
Why live and learn
Everyone who has betrayed us
Keep this
Keep the hatred I feel for you
Everyone who has betrayed us

And now I know
You are more than cute
But notHe seemed to recognize that
He was my brother, my brother,
Why

And now I know
Why live and learn
Everyone who has betrayed us
Keep this
Keep the hatred I feel for you
Everyone who has betrayed us

By Brandon Perry © 2009